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Alex Johnson

BTEC Enterprise · Submitted 2 hours ago

Presentation Preview – Business Plan

My Business Plan

Executive Summary

This business plan outlines my idea for EcoThreads – an online marketplace for sustainable, second-hand fashion. The target market is 16–24 year olds who want affordable, eco-friendly clothing choices.

£4.2B

Market Size

+18%

Growth Rate

£12k

Year 1 Target

Slide 1 of 8

Title

Summary

Market

Finance

Marketing

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Mrs Thompson

Great start on your title slide! The design is clear and professional. Consider adding more detail to slide 3 about your target market — who specifically are your customers? 😊

Today at 9:14am

Mrs Thompson

Really impressed with your financial projections — you've thought through this carefully. Well done for including the market growth statistics! 🌟

Today at 9:16am

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